For the assignment today, we were given as the subject, ‘something which sends a chill down the spine’.
The form: concrete poetry = a shape,
The device: anaphora/epistrophe. Anaphora = repetition of the same words, or cluster of words at the beginning of multiple lines of verse. I did that yesterday (not knowing what the device was called). I decided to do my own thing again today but using the first two criteria. Hope you like it. I wrote it this morning in a Word document. In that document words forming the hilt of the dagger coloured deep purple, whilst the blade of the dagger is coloured red, to represent the blood. It didn’t transfer over and I can’t seem to add coloured text. Annoying. Please can you just imagine the colours? Many thanks 🙂
COLD HATE
Cold
steel
Sharp point
Plunged in Protruding
out, Handle gripped
Anger ripped
Warm blood
Spurting red
Leaching out
Sharp cries
Last breath
Body dead
Cold heart
Cold steel
Stained
with
Hate
…
..
.
Chilling and deadly. Wow! I’m sorry I missed this poem this past week! Beautifully done.
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Very creative! Good job! Jane Basil likes to do poems with shapes. She’s good at it, too.
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I’ll have to go take a look – I’ve never tried it before but I really enjoyed the challenge.
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Wickedly gripping 😉
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Ha ha, thank you – not sure what got into me with that one 😅
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You are welcome. It showed another creative dark side of you 😉
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Wow! Chilling indeed. Your words, the shape, and just those two words together: cold hate.
Very well done!
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Thanks so much!
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Ooooooh, I liked this!
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Thank you.
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I agree, chilling. The pointed shape could be a knife or icicle. I particularly liked “Handle gripped/Anger ripped…” The rhythm of the poem seemed stabbing as well as the content. Great job.
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Thank you so much, and thank you for taking the time to visit and comment ☺
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Chilling piece!
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I had a great time writing this – not sure what it says about me though! Thanks for dropping by.
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